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Post by Storm on Jun 26, 2011 0:12:55 GMT -5
(Thanks! I laugh at it every time I watch it..XD)
As Goldenheart was just about to close her eyes, she glanced at Dovefeather, who was still in the Nursery. It's okay!" she called as the warrior had already left the den. Sighing, she lay her chin on her paws. "Goodness, young Warriors these days.." she chuckled to herself.
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Post by poisonedleaf on Jun 26, 2011 0:17:00 GMT -5
The day went by very fast, and Dovefeather still hadn't found Rainpaw. She looked all around the territory, and still no sign of him. She returned back to camp only to find Rainpaw licking his pelt by the apprentices den. "Rainpaw!!!!!" She up to him. "Where in starclan's name were you!?" "Ummm...i was...hunting..."He lied. "No you weren't! tell me the truth now!" She demanded. Rainpaw knelt down in shame. *sigh* "I went swimming," He confessed. "Swimming!? cats don't go swimming!"__Dovefeather "well, i more like, cleaned myself. You see, i got sprayed by a skunk..." "A skunk?" well, none the less, you should have told me where you were going, i was really worried." "Sorry, Dovefeather." "im sorry, but you must be punished, you will work for the elders, no you will fetch prey for Goldenheart everyday until i say so." "Yes, Dovefeather." "And if she needs anything, you will full fill that need, okay?" She narrowed her eyes. "Yes Dovefeather," Rainpaw replied, and lo ward himself more.
-the night passed and morning came- "Goldenflower? are you awake?" Rainpaw came into the nursery. _____________________________________________________
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Post by Storm on Jun 26, 2011 1:22:18 GMT -5
(She didn't)
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Post by poisonedleaf on Jun 26, 2011 8:27:14 GMT -5
(yes, i did, i just modified it) ANYWAY BACK TO STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!
-the night passed and morning came- "Goldenflower? are you awake?" Rainpaw came into the nursery.
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Post by Storm on Jun 26, 2011 17:31:22 GMT -5
(Don't godmod, which is also controling the day and night cycle. I'll be the one who determines when dawn approaches. Also, it's Goldenheart :3)
Goldenheart drowsily opened her amber eyes to be greeted by Rainpaw. Lifting her head up right away, she managed to cuff him gently around the ear. "Where were you? I haven't seen you since yesterday morning!" she scolded, a frown on her face.
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Post by poisonedleaf on Jun 26, 2011 19:51:45 GMT -5
(oh right sorry, i actually didn't know the meaning of godmodding, but i think thats a little over the edge with the rules...but hey, it's your forum. Oh right, sorry, must have hesitated while i was writing her name ^^ Rainpaw shook and ruffled his fur. "Sorry, if i worried you, but i was to embarrassed to come back to camp... after i got squirted by a skunk... but i do have a punishment!" he rethought with anger.
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Post by Storm on Jun 26, 2011 20:05:23 GMT -5
(Godmodding and Powerplaying are in the Forum rules.)
"It's a good thing you do!" she snapped, amusement glittering in her eyes. Feeling a bit hungry, Goldenheart forgot about scolding Rainpaw and instead asked him, "Rainpaw, could you please go get me a piece of prey, please?" she asked politely, her stomach growling.
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Post by poisonedleaf on Jun 26, 2011 20:10:10 GMT -5
Rainpaw dipped his head. "That is what i came here to tell you, Goldenheart. Dovefeather gave me the job to take care of you. So, yes goldenheart, i will be right back," Rainpaw stepped out of the nursery. The sun was blinding him as he narrowed his eyes to try to find the fresh-kill pile. He went up to it, and took a plump wood pigeon and returned back to the nursery. "Here, Goldenheart." He said as he placed the pigeon in front of her paws. "Need anything else, before i carry on with my apprentice duties?" he asked.
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Post by Storm on Jun 26, 2011 20:13:25 GMT -5
Goldenheart smiled as Rainpaw returned. "Thank you, Rainpaw. And no, I think I can handle everything else." she mewed gratefully, pulling the pigeon closer. '"And don't worry if Dovefeather thinks you're treating me badly, I'll remind her you're already doing a great job." she offered, resting her kind gaze on the apprentice.
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Post by poisonedleaf on Jun 26, 2011 20:16:09 GMT -5
Rainpaw bowed his head again. "Thank you, Goldenheart. But if you need anything! please ask me, and i will do or get it for you. okay?"
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